silvermoon17

Where did you get Visserion, then? Oh it doesn't matter really, but don%u2019t watch game of thrones before you read it. Be warned. Oh and what I pointed out is ...

Man, I have athazagoraphobia and this made me wince I guess your description warned me..

Working on it :)

thanks :) if you have any poems you'd like me to read, i'd be happy to do so

Nice way of putting in that when you have a character in a poem, you criticize both or none

Thanks for explaining who Nyx is ^^

Thanks for explaining who Nyx is ^^

Envision..? Death..? If you say so.. nice twist XD

I%u2019ll review your stuff :) btw, I really liked this

I did not misspell truth, trut is another word which has the same meaning as truth

It did, but I guessed all that. I simply meant that all you said; you should%u2019ve put that in your poem.

Zaminami it%u2019s so weird you saying it%u2019s be an absolute dream to have a girlfriend.. because girls feel the same

I%u2019m sorry if I%u2019m unclear, what I meant was simply.. well.. yeah, to expand your metaphors. Maybe (if you know what it means) an extended metaphor would be great. But ...

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Ok hey, here for a review(all that polite shit) So I really like that opening. You begin with the main point, insecurity. So maybe you could do something like (Insecurity ...

I feel like I%u2019ve known you for years.. and no, you%u2019ve not ruined any chance of getting to know me better :) it seem opposites.. So.. we begin from scrap..? ...