sillyducky

To You, Writer’s Block He sits there, eyes cringing, as he focuses on the blank paper. Envy. At this point in time, perhaps ‘he’ should have written… It is barren, ...

NOTE: THIS IS A POEM BASED ON THE ANGLO-SAXON STYLE LITERATURE. I have seen many winters, some of great joy, some of many tears. I like this already :D It ...

... I DO like it. As was said before, the descriptions are great and the writing is wonderful, but the end is a bit dramatic. I'm not a big fan ...

I'mma nitpick 'cause I feel like it xD It wasn’t expected to find Malcolm – science whizz (whiz?) and DnD (D&D? Not sure about that one) player dead, at his ...

I'm not going to stand here and watch you burn It's not worth watching the tears your (you're) crying now You will always be safe here In my arms you're ...

I love this poem, especially the way you've described normal things so perfectly that they're memorable. I can also picture these things in my mind because I've seen them, too. ...

Like the person above me said (sorry, I don't remember your user name) the rhythm leaves a bit to be desired. I read it out loud like I do with ...

I don't have much to say about this that hasn't already been said. First of all, good luck with the contest. Second of all, I hope you win. And third ...

bizarre... quirky... interesting! I liked it. That's the best kind of poem. The only thing I would say is although I liked your grocery store thing, I wouldn't elaborate on ...

this is amazing raz... I'm not trying to slack off when I say there's not much that I can correct. The dead part at the beginning is a little confusing, ...

There are many things in this world that are unknown to many and so they are named the term secrets. Secrets are those words that you say to the most ...

Chapter One: The pale yellow moon appeared by dusk, but Annie did not even notice it from her bedroom window. A few stars dotted the cloudless sky—now a perfect shade ...

Short review... don't have much time... Prolouge: Finally, summer's coming. I love this sentence, though I'm not sure why. The writer leaned her back against the thick trunk of a ...

This isn't anything amazing, just something I quickly did for a friend of mine that needed a little uplifting. --- I may not be able to ease your aching heart ...