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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Only You

    I really enjoyed this poem. It was cute, and I think everyone can relate to this. We all have our friends that we wouldn't be able to live without. Here ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Me Against Myself

    There is some really strong and great emotion in this piece. Really enjoyed reading it! :) Here are just my comments and suggestions: I hate you. Good way to get ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: As Much As I Love You?

    I love this poem!

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Masterpiece

    Loved the poem! (: It has a great message. I also thought that the way you wrote it was very unique and creative. It's different than a lot of the ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Change the world

    I thought that the story and idea behind the poem was really great and inspiring. I think by writing this peom, you are actually improving the world by motivating others ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I am a Poet

    I love this poem! I think that a lot of people on here can relate to it. I thought that the flow and idea behind it were both really great. ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Don't Come To My Funeral

    Wow, I absolutely loved this poem! It has a dark feel to it that I like. The story was unique, and when I started reading I was so surprised. I ...

    Apr 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: To My Stalker

    Great poem, creepy.. but still very good! The rhymning and story are both great (: Here are some suggestions/corrections: Stalker, stalker, following me, outside my house, and in my tree. ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Letters of Love

    Great poem! There are a lot of poems about love,but you still managed to make this one unique. I loved the concept of it and your word choice. I also ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Heartbeat

    I really liked this poem, it was interesting. It almost reminded me of something that you could use for choral reading. I liked the ending how you said And all ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Hate Love Poems

    Loved the poem! The rhymnin and flow were both really good :) There weren't really any corrections or errors that I could find. I really like the story behind the ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: This is Me

    I can relate to this poem a lot, loved it :) I agree with a Amelia though, there wasn't a lot of emotion in the poem. Try adding more to ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Flying

    I really enjoyed this poem :) It had a fun and uplifting tone to it. I also liked the idea behind it. It's one of those poems that give you ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Cloud Nine

    The imagery and word diction you used were very powerful and unique. It really added to this poem. I couldn't find any apparent errors or corrections, so I'm not going ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pretty Without The 'R'

    Wow! I absolutely loved this poem! The story was great, well in a sad way of course. It was long, but kept my interest, so great work with that! The ...

    Apr 21, 2011


Dogs love their friends and bite their enemies, quite unlike people, who are incapable of pure love and always have to mix love and hate.
— Sigmund Freud