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Re: Only You
I really enjoyed this poem. It was cute, and I think everyone can relate to this. We all have our friends that we wouldn't be able to live without. Here ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Me Against Myself
There is some really strong and great emotion in this piece. Really enjoyed reading it! :) Here are just my comments and suggestions: I hate you. Good way to get ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: As Much As I Love You?
I love this poem!
May 1, 2011 -
Re: A Masterpiece
Loved the poem! (: It has a great message. I also thought that the way you wrote it was very unique and creative. It's different than a lot of the ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Change the world
I thought that the story and idea behind the poem was really great and inspiring. I think by writing this peom, you are actually improving the world by motivating others ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: I am a Poet
I love this poem! I think that a lot of people on here can relate to it. I thought that the flow and idea behind it were both really great. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Don't Come To My Funeral
Wow, I absolutely loved this poem! It has a dark feel to it that I like. The story was unique, and when I started reading I was so surprised. I ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: To My Stalker
Great poem, creepy.. but still very good! The rhymning and story are both great (: Here are some suggestions/corrections: Stalker, stalker, following me, outside my house, and in my tree. ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Letters of Love
Great poem! There are a lot of poems about love,but you still managed to make this one unique. I loved the concept of it and your word choice. I also ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Heartbeat
I really liked this poem, it was interesting. It almost reminded me of something that you could use for choral reading. I liked the ending how you said And all ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: I Hate Love Poems
Loved the poem! The rhymnin and flow were both really good :) There weren't really any corrections or errors that I could find. I really like the story behind the ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: This is Me
I can relate to this poem a lot, loved it :) I agree with a Amelia though, there wasn't a lot of emotion in the poem. Try adding more to ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Flying
I really enjoyed this poem :) It had a fun and uplifting tone to it. I also liked the idea behind it. It's one of those poems that give you ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Cloud Nine
The imagery and word diction you used were very powerful and unique. It really added to this poem. I couldn't find any apparent errors or corrections, so I'm not going ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Without The 'R'
Wow! I absolutely loved this poem! The story was great, well in a sad way of course. It was long, but kept my interest, so great work with that! The ...
Apr 21, 2011
