silented1

So messy. Love it.

Your structure shows a good back and forth. Well done, it captures an unsaid thing. Remember that.

Recognized.

Very cerebral. Almost hyper realistic in the sense that it seems indifferent.

Hope you find your way out of this dark place. Think of solutions. Not unending bad times. Might help you move into a better place. Hope to see more. Review: ...

Loved it, whisper screamed it for fun.

Like it! Good to get things out.

Try writing about missing writing. It might help.

Like.. more in depth. AND THANK YOU for commenting questions!

Love it, it's good poem. Have you tried being a bit more personal? It'd help with understanding and recieving the message more intensely.

Pengu!! Thank you, you're right, i need to try to add words to make it smoother.

Of course you can. No name please.

I like the song like tone of this, it reads well, I see you worked on it too, with the rhymes and the similarly lengthened lines. Well done. You might ...

Thank you.

It'd be nice if you added a thought to this to make it more impacting.