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nahhh keep it like that, it sounds better to wouldn't make much sense if they were born after all of this? and i do have a question about its beginning ...

wow that is soo cool !!! if you read left to right it makes sense and if you read it by column it makes sense !! that is so cool! ...

ahh rachel i found you! this is so small that there isn't really much to say. why did this warmth leave? i'd like to see that answered. whats so great ...

i didn;t exactly like the slight repetition of the frickle blossoms and the bubble laughter. i do not think that they were used too well...sorry. this seems to have almost ...

hmm it is small...won't be too much to say. but you should give more description of the man, more of how it affects you and him, and the good bye ...

hmm i never saw the movie...but i'd like for this peom to go into more detail about how it hurt you... why do want this person with you so much... ...

i didn't like the repetition of we go marching and the use of a train... although i do see how it can be used to try and show how its ...

pretty nice there plant kid(yeah what of it?).. i did enjoy this... how you didn't just make a vague poem of nothingness... but you gave different ideas of what it ...

hello christy !!! quiet the poem you have here my friend...itssad that you had to go and watch this...and that your friends went through this along with you... i didn't ...

In distant, dark places- A factory, unbound- The smog and hazy smoke Call to us. To breathe the smoke Is disgraceful? To breathe the smog Is life. The assembly lines ...

wow miss amy can flyy ! your story was quite good...send me your links more often my dear...its not everyday / month that i find a post i enjoy reading...i ...

horrrrayyy !!! For subconscience writing !!! gotta love the feelin' so good...then just letting it fade a rather great experiance... and you could break this up but i like it ...

mehhhh... to be rather honest.. like i always am... i didn't like it.. people change and they begin to hate you.. from different parts ofyour past they may learn about...may ...

haha i am proud to be your first reviewer.. sort of.. because i suck at this haha... but i think i'd be better if you broke it up.. i don't ...

This poem is for a contest on Remembrance Day, I would like some feedback to make it as excellent as possible. Hope you enjoy! :smt001 --- A Soldier’s Last Prayer ...