silented1

I see a world of possibilities, I am sure you can make this less direct and boring. How do you see a world of possibilities, what am I supposed to ...

Would you kiss me if I said I loved you? Would you hug if I said I cared? Hug me, do you mean? and refer to below for further instruction. ...

I leapt through the Autumn leaves Bridging the chasm of empty air. Nice. I like this. Series of gold and red fall softly as I leap. Series? What is a ...

Welcome to the site, I forgot to check when you joined, so please don't let this scare you, if it does. I mean no harm, nor do I mean to ...

Hope everyone likes this :D not my best work br I like the idea of this. ENJOY! Your devil is my lover, A love that makes one wonder Why it ...

Listening to Guqin in Autumn The troughs lay barren Unused hay stacked high You should put some punctuation in there, it was kind of hard to see what it ment, ...

Wisdom. The way your insight ignites, school's just a launching site. Straight path, I don't exactly like this, the straight path, then the curve to the right. I like the ...

Why do you stare at me with hatred and fear? You should use a simile / metaphor here instead of directly saying hatred and fear. I am the same person ...

There are little microorganisms that are living on you who have given you some form of invisibility. And it’s absorbing your words so that you can’t even say anything to ...

Morning Glory A vine ascends in the night Its pedals closed tight in the moonlight Exploring the cracks and curves of brick and stone It slowly destroys as its beauty ...

What is it that I feel when I look into your eyes? My heart soars, rips my chest, leaves me and flies These are kinda all the same thing for ...

THE WHIMSICAL WASP A wee shadow crept on the tiles on the floor Flowing with the flow of water Flow is kinda redundent. I looked up and saw to whom ...

When the evening is spread out like a canvas Across the sky And the empty streets echo my footsteps I wonder if I shall ever see your eyes Staring right ...

Aware of the weather A rise, yesterday But this morning is cold The first two lines don't go togeather at all. And you use a rise and yesterday in the ...

Hatred Red, bloody Deep clenching Inside Anger Thrown in For a spice Chicken and rice Random, nice. No connection Yet the same I hate you I hate them I hate ...