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edit: sorry, it got posted twice...

Wow, wow, wow... that's all I can really say. This was amazingly, gut-wrenchingly powerful, and you sounded like you meant every word of it. It was passionate and fiery and ...

thank you for the review! :)

thanks!

thanks! When I edit it I'll keep what you said in mind.

My computer is acting really funny today. I'm sorry if my review is hard to understand because it doesn't really have spaces between paragraphs, and is sometimes missing spaces between ...

thanks! I'll try to edit it now!

Thank you! I'll take what you said into account.

So, for some reason, my computer won't let me post the reveiw, so if you want to read it let me know and I'll message it to you.

Wow! this is really good! Your imagery is beautiful!

Hmm... I didn't realize that! Thanks for telling me!

thank you!

thank you! I'll take what you said into account.

Sorry- I don't know how this got here, I must of accidentally clicked submit.

This is really good! I love your style of writing. It flows really well and I especially loved the line "The girl with the bad habit lay as still as ...