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You twisted it so hard that I'm having troubles to untwist it. Great. Lol. So it was really amazing. At first,I thought, you are calling on the death. Then I ...

I really like your poem very much. I felt like you live inside my mind and we both are having the same feelings. you got the reader's thoughts and feelings. ...

Brilliant one!! The poem is way too short. But it's very very strong and deep. You really have shown something that we all feel. You know, revolution starts in this ...

Wow! It was an excellent one. I really enjoyed the story and I felt like I was watching everything with my own eyes. That's the visualization power which is really ...

I felt like I was hearing a sad story of a marshmallow from itself. Hahaha. It was good and simple one. You described the scenery vividly. I like the description ...

It was remarkable. Hahaha. I continued reading without losing my interest. Actually it is a writer's sucess to be able to keep up the reader's interest,isn't it? You have presented ...

Hello! You have a wonderful idea to raise a feeling within the readers. So that's good. It's short,yet strong.Besides the romantic aroma is present in your poem nicely. But I ...

Hi! Well,the story was a good one. But I have a few suggestions. The story has an interesting beginning. But it would look much better if there was any short ...