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Thanks for pointing out that error; it's extremely helpful. And I can't tell you how much I look forward to your reviews! They are always so enthusiastic, encouraging, and funny!!! ...

Thanks so much Phoenix!!! I'm glad you liked it. I also find that invisible person rather frustrating. For now, I do know who it is, but you know better than ...

So, Henry didn't really become the enemy as I thought. The chapter's title led me to think that he would abandon Ala. Perhaps he isn't coming back. Nevertheless, I'm glad ...

Nice Tiana - 'you play with him too much'. And? So what! Wow, I can already tell that this Tiana is going to be the head of the 'mean girls'. ...

How on earth did they get from e-l-e-fant to Luhfint?! So funny! Very poignant and cute this short story. I was laughing and found it so relatable! Can't wait to ...

Thanks Horisun!

You are awesome! I love how you put into words exactly what I felt about dignity!!! So intuitive of you gurl! And yes, Kkachi's mother was the daughter of the ...

Thanks for the incredible review Awru! I had a feeling that the title "Chieftain's Daughter" would raise some questions. It literally became just a title over the years. If you ...

Ha ha!!! Awru ... I see you and I'm going to get ya!!! (just kidding) Don't worry, you didn't give much away and Horisun will see when she will see. ...

Great point! That would allow a lot of depth to his character. I think that his mom has been dead for a while now and he already has moved past ...

Glad that it happens to a fellow writer ;)

Great idea! I'll definitely be keeping that in mind when I go back and edit. So right! Such a great opportunity to develop or deepen relationships and I missed it. ...

Thanks so much! I'm glad that this chapter touched you. It means so much. As I get deeper and deeper into this story it starts taking me along different paths ...

Great question! I guess I always assumed that the grandparents went into such deep undercover that even the Emperor didn't know where they were. He wanted it that way because ...

You have great instincts! Love your comment about pizza. Unfortunately pizza hasn't been invented yet. ;)