shieldmaiden

Hey! You can't leave it like that (well, actually you can as the writer, but that's just plain torture)! I really liked this piece. I'm a fan of love that ...

Wow ... such a beautiful piece with a heartfelt and important message. I especially loved your description. You truly have a gift. My favorite pieces that you wrote are: "The ...

Are you trying to mess with my mind on purpose?! First you have me liking Zander, then despising him, then liking him. What's going on? I'm so confused. Part of ...

Wow! Awkward or what! That was super funny and I really enjoyed having Zander pop in and out with his own sassy comments. I mean, what guy/girl doesn't find that ...

Hey Phoenix, I really liked this chapter. Only a few spelling errors. There was "sent" which I think was to mean "scent", "dissent" which is spelled "descent", and "pray" in ...

Such a sweet chapter! I love that we are able to get inside Nathan's head. I had no idea he was that much in love with Katie. Now, it will ...

Oh my Gosh!!!! I can't believe that Nathan is a hunter. That was a complete surprise and makes me love him even more. And - he probably can fix her ...

Hey Honora! So glad to have Zander back. I really enjoy and appreciate his character. Nice chapter and I was quite relieved that you spared the mom's life. Also, I ...

Hey Honora! So, such a great chapter. I felt that we were in Katie's head enough to feel what she was. I imagine that she is feeling rather numb from ...

Oooh! Is she a half-dragon? I'm really excited to find out what her 'nationality' is! Very well written and I'm also curious about Thomas. You gave him a mysterious aura, ...

Amazing piece of work, Honora! You had me hooked from the beginning of this chapter to the very end. I was kind of expecting her to just run away after ...

Great chapter. Didn't disappoint. However, I was really surprised how well Ralys took with being sent over to his dad's. I would have felt completely abandoned and tossed out like ...

Really nice story. I can really feel Ralys' frustration and angst. Yet, I really respect Liam and how he is dealing with a rebellious teen. If I'm supposed to hate ...

Wow, you wrote this when you were in Grade 4? Incredible! It is so great and I really enjoy how the dialogue goes inside her head. I relate a lot ...

Hey Honora! Love the tension you built up here. I feel so bad for Katie, yet she can't really tell her parents what's happening. "My mind is syncing up with ...