sheysse

@magestorrow

Thanks for the review! It was an unexpected start to my afternoon haha.

Thanks for the review! what is it with you and reviewing my year old works xD Also, does that mean you've seen Mushi-Shi?

Thanks for the review! Also, thanks for reminding me I wrote this. XD Haven't really gotten any responses to anything, since I honestly barely remember this story's plot. But really, ...

Thanks for the review! I'll be keeping your suggestions in mind in future drafts, and of course upcoming chapters.

Thanks for the review! I'll be keeping your comments in mind in future chapters and drafts! (As an aside, Nalu and Natu's names are being changed, which I'll mention in ...

Thanks for the review! I'll be keeping your comments in mind for future drafts and chapters. :)

Thanks for the review! I realize now that my description of the kingdom is lackluster, so next chapter I'll try and flesh it out a bit. Next draft, I'll take ...

Thanks for the review! I'm gonna be keeping your comments in mind in the future, especially on the topic of fleshing out the magic in every day life, and not ...

Thanks for the review! Glad to hear your take on the characters and see how it lines up with what I'm trying to portray. :) As for fleshing out Meru, ...

Thanks for the review! I only have time right now to skim it, so I'm gonna take a closer look at this whole thing when I get a chance. However, ...

Will do! Thanks. :)

Thanks for the comments! I was kinda rushed in writing this chapter, so I think it shows, whoops. On the topic of the twins and their names, I get your ...

Thanks for the comments! I'll keep em in mind. Also, thanks for helping me decide on the book title. ;)

Alrighty, thanks again!