sheysse

I did exactly that and forgot!

I did exactly that and forgot!

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed! The duet section was included to exaggerate her loss... It was meant to show that she is all alone in the world. ...

Thank you for the review, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thnks for the review! Yeah, it was kinda cheesy, and that was the point of the whole story. I never named them because I just didn't think it was necessary, ...

Thanks for the review! My logic with the tense shift is simply that it's being written as a journal entry, so perfect grammar isn't truly necessary. After all, the narrator ...

Oh, my bad. Apologies. :( Hope that at least I gave somewhat helpful advice for deep poems. Again, sorry for wasting your time with this review.

I somehow forgot I already reviewed and started a second review... XD

Thank you for the review! This is my first attempt at poetry, and while I knew it was a common topic, I tried it anyway to see what would happen. ...

;) (I wink a lot, don't I?)

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed this! While I don't have a twin, I look nearly identical to my older sister. I wrote this with the emotion is experience ...

Not a true story. Glad you enjoyed it!

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Hello, Shey here for a review! You have an interesting song here that I can tell you put a lot of time into. The use of the chorus and the ...

Thanks for the review!