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Hello... Haven't read something this mysterious and intelligent from someone who's not a well-known author. to put it simply, this story reminded me strongly of the works of Sir Arthur ...

HELLO.. I am not sure about whether this is over or not. I mean, is it? Nice story, though. I wouldn't say it's sad or sorrowful or ENTIRELY depressing. I ...

Hello... First and foremost.... WELCOME TO YWS!!! And now, we can get down to business. For a 100-year-old person, you really can not be a brick wall, huh?.... please, excuse ...

Hello... *Releases a sigh* I am reviewing after some time, so... please bear with me. If the intention of your poem was to make me depressed, it sure did. I ...

Hey Tronks, Great work and I'm drawn to the protagonist Larry and I want to get to know him... not in a queer sense, but, in a friendly way. I ...

Hello. First of all there are way too many grammatical errors that make the reading very unpleasant. The story, the description, everything is good, but, without proper grammar it all ...

Hey. I really enjoyed the description and the queer names of the characters. Wonderfully mysterious and thrilling and now I want to know about the characters even more. Here and ...

Hey Totally enjoyed the chapter and well... that definitely escalated. I'm a tad bit paranoid right now about the whole circumstance. But, seriously... Are Novites human or alien? this is ...

Hello. The writing is fresh and the story is engaging and mysterious. I definitely want to uncover the mystery of the Novites. Based on the narration, the story doesn't seem ...

Hey BonnieorClyde, WELCOME TO YWS!! Have a blast here and post and read to your heart's content. Great story you got there and wonderfully descriptive and sweet. And the title ...

Hey Uriah. Great work and I have no words remaining for praising you. A wonderful depiction of the New Age and great sarcasm and sass and realism. Although, reality depends ...

Hey Uriah, Great work and I am hooked to your greatly descriptive story. Very informative and the historical references and the mockery of WWII is just astounding. PP's perversity and ...

Hey Uriah. Intriguing story is the only thought I have right now. I have noticed that there are more parts to this and I'm definitely going to read it..... now. ...

Hello. First of all, "the empty hasn't found its volume" Emptiness. Sorry, for meaning business. The thing is, yes, I love your poem. Fabulous network of words and emotions and ...

Hello. Great poem Chaser, nice word play. The story goes very well with the refrain "the simple wicked irony" and the rhymes are not forced, rather suave. There's a thin ...