shadowed_mist

Hello, Skittles. The pier view below my apartment window was brilliant. The small cramped room with a musty bed and an unbalanced desk was everything a writer could ask for. ...

You have the usual problems that every writer suffers: grammer!!!!!! How many times do I have to tell you?! You're driving me mad! Other then that, the story is very ...

I love this story so much! My favorite is the old professer who ke[t falling asleep... I'm not the best reviewer, but I'm going to try my best. The description ...

I love it. It's amazingly amazing and surprisingly familiar. I like it how Latios is a vampire, but that didn't surprise me. He seemed like the vampire type. I hate ...

Amazing! I love it! Keep writing, its amazing! some gramatical errors really ticked me off, but those can be easily fixed! I liked how you made Death someone people wouldn't ...

Yes, you're grammer really is bad. Luckily, my friend's grammer is even worse than yours and I managed to decode the story. Nice second chapter. A couple things I would ...

You know, the beginning part where the local is speared to the wall reminds me of Indiana Jones.... Do you usually depend on your dreams for stories? I do... I'm ...

I won't be too meticulous, but you weren't very descriptive. You skipped a lot of information I would have liked to know... The ending was utterly dissapointing. I mean, I ...

I like it so far... I'm not such a big fan with the 'new kid' idea, but that's probably because I've used it so many times in my own stories.... ...

Overall, very good. I don't really see the fiction in this, because this could all really happen. But I kind of get where you're getting. Like everyone else, I suggest ...

That's cool. What she before me said, you need to make paragraphs. I'm not a big fan of them either, but they make the reader think that the words are ...

I won't quote like everyone else did. They pretty much wrapped it up. You do know how to write, and well. Just put your story in Word and try and ...

What's the plot to this story? It sounds like you took half of chapter one and threw it on the site. I mean, you're writing's good, but you need to ...

I can't say I cried. I never cry during books. But this needs some more mourning. As quoted by Gail Casron Levine, "MAKE YOUR CHARECTERS SUFFER!" I need details! I ...

I like it. Its really good. I want to read the next chapter! You left me hanging! These are one of those stories I would stay up late at night ...