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Re: on apologies
Hey! Okay for starters this is so beautiful. I absolutely love how you base this all around the word 'okay.' It seems so simple, but you make it dynamic. I ...
Nov 4, 2015 -
Re: My Little Girl
Hey! Your poem has such a beautifully sad topic. You wrote it so well, but I do have some suggestions. The second line of the poem where you say [quote] ...
Oct 29, 2015 -
Re: dear you.
Hey! I love the meaning behind the poem and how I can really feel your emotion through it. I like that you crossed out lines in your poem as it ...
Oct 29, 2015 -
Re: A Stormy Night(mare)
Hey! So I really enjoyed this story due to the fact you threw me for a loop at the end. The story seemed to be going one direction and then ...
Oct 23, 2015 -
Re: Talk to Me
I love the opening of your story! The way you introduced the situation between the narrator and Markus really captivated me. I loved how your quote of She sat with ...
Oct 16, 2015
