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  • Poetry » General, General Re: on apologies

    Hey! Okay for starters this is so beautiful. I absolutely love how you base this all around the word 'okay.' It seems so simple, but you make it dynamic. I ...

    Nov 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: My Little Girl

    Hey! Your poem has such a beautifully sad topic. You wrote it so well, but I do have some suggestions. The second line of the poem where you say [quote] ...

    Oct 29, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: dear you.

    Hey! I love the meaning behind the poem and how I can really feel your emotion through it. I like that you crossed out lines in your poem as it ...

    Oct 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Realistic Re: A Stormy Night(mare)

    Hey! So I really enjoyed this story due to the fact you threw me for a loop at the end. The story seemed to be going one direction and then ...

    Oct 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Talk to Me

    I love the opening of your story! The way you introduced the situation between the narrator and Markus really captivated me. I loved how your quote of She sat with ...

    Oct 16, 2015


Proud people breed sad sorrows for themselves.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights