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Re: Eden
It was kinda too short. I was expecting more lines, but I find it spiritual as I can relate to it. Yeah. Things here are ordinary, and everything will fade, ...
Dec 26, 2014 -
Re: No such thing as 'peace'
Reflecting to the story, it seems like you're bugged or somewhat controlled. There's so much hatred and I believe you want to break-free from it so you wrote it instead. ...
Feb 14, 2013 -
Re: My House of Cards
Hi Bandz, I'm not really good at this but I do love your way of writing though there's some lines which are gramatically incorrect... But it's okay, I do make ...
Aug 31, 2012 -
Re: Look at a Swan
Hi, I think this is your method to relieve. The flow is quite smooth and relaxing. Love it. :)
Jun 27, 2012 -
Re: Want A Laugh? Read My Poem.! :)
nice. :)
Mar 10, 2012 -
Re: *deleted*
jash, i'm not really good at reviewing as i am not considering myself as a writer.. But this story did capture some moments from my past though some parts are ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: I'd like to write a poem
Hey, senzafine here. Your title have caught my attention. :) Well I'm not good at reviewing other's work but I kinda like it. Very flawless! Keep it up. -senzafine
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Black Angel
Honestly I'm not good at reviewing works.. but honestly, I can relate to that. It seems like something is keeping you from revealing who you are. "Insecurity! I guess...." Well. ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Just for you.
Well I'm not good at reviewing others work but I kinda like it. Your words were bold and I can feel clearly that you really love this guy. (how pityful) ...
Jun 4, 2011
