selenasacuna

again i did the vampir on purpose... a peer sound instaed of an e sound at the end selena

i spelled the title like that for a reason. instead of vampire with an e at the end i took it off to make a peer sound at the end

i like it i can almost feel the emotions rolling through my head. of sadness anger dissapointment and happiness.

that is one awesome peom! i thought i had read it all i could actually see everything in my mind!!! selena

i loved your peom everything to me antways flowed just like it should. selena

thanks everyone for the advice i'm hardly ever on here and ill try to work on it and fix it as soon as i can. selena

i loved your story but the only thing is this: i see how he's broken up and he sees a new and prettier girl but wht is the ex still ...

hello thanks for liking it dont worry ill add more detail about the two love birds later for now the female sacuna is just about to get her powers and ...

hm i like robert frost especially fire and ice.

thank you i wrote this for her

thanks

im just a begginer so please bear with me my mom has bunders full of things like this and im just stretching my wings< jokeing... anyways i personally always like ...

i like the story but you focused a little to much on her and not alot on him