seekingthetruth

This is seeking the truth here to review your fabulous poem interesting and intriguing I was immediately drawn to your poem when I first read the first line and I ...

Hello Seeking The Truth here to reivew your poem I loved this poem. it was really different from all the other poems I have reviewed this week as they all ...

its too long for starts , I did not really understand the whole concept of the poem and I did enjoy the realist imagery you inserted into this piece , ...

thier is nothing wrong with this its abosulty perfect , the words you use are formidable you created a tower around you its dark and compelling but sure I am ...

Hello I am Seeking the truth here to review your poem. I enjoyed reading this , even though it was sad and depressing , but all the best poets put ...

this is very short and I mean very short one of the shortest poems I seeking the truth have reviewd , this is going to be difficult but it still ...

Really splendid job , you have what it takes to be a true poet. you expressed your emotions and feelings into one poem was amazing becuase u made me as ...

Hi welcome to YWS I want to start by saying I loved it , I loved the rhyming and I can relate to this becuase reading is what makes me ...

hi seeking the truth here A little discombobulating near the middle and to be honest you did not really need to make it complicated just turn your ideas on paper ...

I am going to say this first I SUPPORT THE DEMOCRATCS I dont know what in the name of god were u thinking when u decided to write this but ...

it was extremely deep and reminded me of horrible times in my life , that made me cry , the title kind of hints about the nature of the poem ...

like what the frick I have to agree with @silvermoon here becuase what the heck is this story about , and I m 16 and this is so confusing and ...

hi seeking the truth here to give you an awesome review , I too love politics and belive in captilaism so when I read your title I just had to ...

Hi raven I am writing this review becuase I was caught by your title but when I got to the second stanza I was shocked and disgusted by the lanauage ...

A couple of things , a short story is supposed to be short this seemed like the first chapter or two of a novle , so make it into a ...