scribblingquill

I love this. i think the start is better than the end, I love the booms, the colours and the bit about "my heart jumping to get to you". Thats ...

it sounds cool so far, but i can't tell of course until i hear it. I'd be really intrigued to hear this song actually. everyone should check out a song ...

I definitely like the end two stanzas, they sealed it for me after i was unsure at the beginning. can I ask, is the last line a quote? or did ...

hey I just started and then scanned through after I noticed you use the MC's name way too much. Its Joseph did this, then Joseph did that... and its just ...

Finally! someone as stupid as me! I went for a walk a couple of days ago and got so far away i tried to take the bus home but got ...

that was really good! I don't think you should dumb it down at all, I love the way you use tangible feelings and sensations, and I think its still perfectly ...

I liked it but I don't think you have to dumb down the bits when you were fifteen. i still have my diaries from the past couple of years and ...

Its not classed as horror persay but you should try Garth Nix's Sabriel, lirael, Abhorsen. Its a fantasy thing, lots of undead and monsters, but the main characters are teenish ...

I LOVE this series. I remember getting the first one and taking it to school in primary five or six and being so proud i was the only one in ...

Yeah its not a masterpiece. But it KNOWS it isn't, and i love it anyway. I read higher calibre stff, and then Meg Cabot and Jim butcher to relax and ...

I love these books! even though I've only just finished the second one,, i was hooked from the first chapter. Its a really quirky mix of wizard fantasy, and CSI ...

oooohhh o.o I love the surrealness of this. Ill get round to reading the other part (at some point, *grin*) and hopefully find out whatthe undersky and the otherlings are. ...

I'm not going to go into any detail. The first thing i noticed was that you use the main character's name way too often, Coden did this, coden did that. ...

I liked this, like the person above said, its good descriptiona and all but doesn't seem to flow very well. i love the idea of the squirrels and the forest, ...

Wow, i really like this. The start is great, the concept the whole friends-or-more-than-friends thing has been done so many times but you make it really interesting, a different slant ...