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Il-kummenti t'hawn isfel huma tajbin hafna u min kitibhom jidher professjonali u genwin. Nissuggerilek taghti kashom. Paula, nahseb b'daqsxejn sforz din tista' tkun storja semia-awtobijografika fiha n

Nice poem, Dr Strangelove. I read Beckett. I know perfectly well what you're talking about.

Paula, rigward l-ahhar vers: ''for the one I truly love''. Xtaqt nigbidlek l-attenzjoni li tul il-poezija kollha m'hemm ebda hjiel, referenza jew xi haga li timplika lil din il-persuna. Deux ...

Il-kelma 'tears' hi uzata spiss, Paula. Trid timplika aktar milli taghti bl-imgharfa lill-qarrej. Imma tqis li hi wahda minn tal-bidu nett, nahseb tghaddi bhala poezija.

Paula, ghadni ma ghamilt xejn hlief naqra l-poeziji tieghek ghal darba, tnejn, tlieta! Il-lirika nahseb hija l-forte tieghek. Jien, talanqas, l-aktar li toghgobni.

This one has vivid and astounding imagery. Paula keep on writing and please let me know when you have new poems.

Lavander or lavender? Mind the spelling, Paula.

Paula certament mhijiex wahda minn dawk iz-zghazagh li jghaddu minn dik il-fazi li juzaw il-poezija bhala moghdija ta' zmien u loghob bil-kliem biex, imbaghad, wara certu zmien jitilqu l-poezija ghal ...

Kollox ghandu x'jaqsam ma' qaghda tar-ruh. Minkejja xi nuqqasijiet teknici li bi zmien ghad jigu rizolti, din it-tfajla qed turi car li taf tohrog b'versi hergin minn qiegh qalbha u ...

I have read and re-read other poems by paula08. There can be no doubt that this young girl has promise as a writer, though it is just as obvious that ...

Dark verses, wonderful poem.