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Hey Sam! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = words/phrases/sentense that I've inserted that I think sound better. Let's get this party started! Glossary of Nebraskan terms at ...

Hey ashleylee! Decided to give your piece a read through :-) Anyway, here goes the review key: Red = Comments Bold = sentences/words/punctuation and stuff that I inserted. Let's do ...

hey Kris! Welcome to YWS! Anyway here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Words/lines/phrases that I've inserted that I think work better. At times they're not perfect so ...

Hey Mathlete! I'm Scasha! Welcome! Anyway, here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Words/phrases/sentences that I inserted that I think would work better. Let's get this party started! ...

Hey again Dustfinger! Here's my review key once more: Red = comments Bold = Words/sentences/phrases that I have inserted that I think could work better. Here we go! ...He was ...

Hey Dustfinger! Sorry if I repeat the stuff the person below me said. Anyway my key: red = comments bold = words I think could work better :-) Let's review: ...

Hey Yelhsa211! Welcome! I'm scasha! Anyway here's my review key red = comments bold = words/lines/sentences I think could work better. Let's get this party started! As the mind-numbing blackness ...

Hey wwjnd! Welcome! anyways here is my review key: Red = comments bold = words/phrases/lines I think would work better! Let's get this started! Hemmingway, Woolf, Tolstoy, Dickens, Poe, Vonnegut. ...

Wow! Great job! I'm not very good at critiquing romances but here a just a few quick suggestions: 1) the ending seemed a little too abrupt with the whole I'm ...

Hey OverEasy! Here's my review red = comments bold = words I think would work better Let's do this thing! I am standing on a beach, where instead of sand ...

Hey Senri! Here's my review key Red= comments bold = words that I think could work better Let's do this thing! Prologue It was the year 1953, and the blizzard ...

Hey Shinox! Here's my review key: red = comments bold = words/sentences/phrases I think could work better Here we go! "Congratulations, Johnathan! You've won your 4th consecutive surfing championship!

Hey mercipoulevenin! Here's my review key: red = comments bold = words that I think could work better Let's get this party started! [s]He stood[/s]. He stood like a fallen ...

Hey again Tanith14! Thanks for reviewing my piece. I'll just look this over for another time to make sure it's perfect :-) Here's my Review Key: Red = Comments Bold ...

Hey LittleBitCold! Welcome! Anyway here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Things/words that I think could work better Here we go! Everyone was talking at once, shouting, screeching, ...