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It began on a gray, cloudy day in late October. A cold, ghostly wind swept the fallen leafs across the rocky landscape. It was about 11 in the morning and ...

Eric was there, waving to me from the driver’s seat of his SSC Aero TT—way cooler than the dinky Porsche by it . -- i think you mean next to ...

On Monday morning, I woke up in a hole. I am farmiliar with the hole. It happened sometimes. I could always tell as soon as my eyes opened. - Good ...

I rubbed my eyes, still half-asleep from the long car ride. It felt as if home was ages away. -- ages away has to do with time. instead say thousands ...

I set down the pack and sighed. My eyes had started to hurt again. They had been bothering me more and more, those days. -- these days not those days ...

Peter lay belly-down on his dragon’s back, slowly stroking the leathery neck. It wouldn’t be too long now -- Peter lay flat on his dragon's back To them, the dragon ...

I almost don’t have a reason to, but for the fact that the world is spinning without me. -- Wow, I have no idea what you are trying to say ...

Hansel sighed and held back helpless tears instead say and tried to hold back helpless teares, “It was bound to happen; the stones worked all too well last time.” -- ...

It turned out that the base wasn’t too far away. The two soldiers marched Leo at gunpoint for a little over ten minutes before they arrived at their destination. On ...

Not to be forgotten about, the other me, the voice, and the whole stupid dream sequence are back again that night. -- I understand what you are trying to say ...

As soon as he did that, Shang zoomed away without a second glance in Zekes direction -- As soon as he stepped out, Shang zoomed away. Two hours later Zeke ...

Once upon a time is old. Life isn’t what is it used to be, and neither are its fairy tales. No more are there knights and shining armor and damsels ...

Handed out lines are prison chains -- i didn't really get the sense that this was going to be a poem with a morbid feel. You might want to try ...

Well done! I loved it. A couple suggestions/ things I noticed: 1) You have Dara refer to Karson as a native a lot when she was talking to him in ...

Especially during autumn nights -- i would take this out, This night -- say: tonight instead of this night Hardly audible over the crashing water was a gentle, yet heartless ...