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Hey Kaylyn! Here is my critique as promised: a line by line and then the macro ideas! Let's do this thing! Bright, tawdry colors flashed past my uncaring eyes as ...

Hey again! Back for my critique number two! Now that school is out I can spend more time reading and writing so I decided to continue with your story. I've ...

Overall Okay, as you can see, I didn't find many grammar errors, just a couple awkward wordings. {I pointed out a couple of areas, but my computer erased them. Try ...

Hey Ashley! I'm back to review another one of your brilliant pieces! Let's see what you've got! This is something that I've wanted to try for a while now. I ...

This is definitley always a hard question, so I'll try to list my top books at this moment in time (it'll probably change in the next few minutes). 1) The ...

Hey KJ! I'm scasha! Anyway, I saw this was edited in august, so i've decided to check it out. Let's see what you've got. Prologue June 6, 2008 Mackenzie Valley ...

Hey!!! I decided that if I am going to check out your writing, I might as well start from the beginning. General stuff: Tellling vs. Showing! More showing please! Also, ...

Hey Thealyn! Here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better Blue = What I want to say but not in red ...

Hey Angel of Death! I saw this floating around the forum, so I decided to critique it, let's see what you've got! Note: This is something entirely new and it ...

Hey Kisonakl! Welcome to YWS! Here's my crit key: red = comments bold = stuff I changed blue = if I don't want to use red. Let's do this thing ...

Hey Sam!! Long time, no critique on my part! Let's see what you got!! The last of my shorts for Cal--I really have no idea how effective this is, because ...

Hey Kris! I saw you put up installment 2! Let's see what you got! "Awake, Dan Kevalis...I have much to say. Awake" Boomed a voice from deep within, each word ...

Hey mtempleton! Here's my review guide: red = comments bold = words I've inserted blue = comments that don't have to do with critiquing the story Let's do this thing ...

Hey kaila! here's your second review! I hope it helps. Cal's Character contest. this is the link: #3 Word: 32: question Picture: 16 **** “Are you sure this is a ...

Hey sapphire! I'm here for critique number two. Let's see what you got! This is my entry for Stella's 'Fairytales Gone Wrong...' contest. It's a rewrite of Cinderella from a ...