scarlettvee

Hey, K.S. Valentine here to review your story! I really liked this chapter, I thought it was cool, and I actually do really like how you don't waste a lot ...

Alright here we go, chapter 3! By the time that I make it home, it is getting dark outside, and the crickets already started their song in the brush. Add ...

Hello, I am back! I really liked the first chapter, so I mean, why not continue? Anyway, I really liked this chapter but I do feel you could probably add ...

Hello! I am here to review you're story! I'm going to go over grammar corrections first, then I'll give you my overall review of the story. It's kind of crazy, ...

*reads the definition at the top of the story* Oh... so this is going to be a story that makes me question my existence, isn't it? *takes a deep breath* ...

Hello! I'm here to edit your essay for you, because I know what it's like to have to turn in writing to school. I'm going to go through grammar corrections ...

Hello there! This story was very unique and creative, and it was a fun little read. I'm just going to jump right into my grammatical corrections though. Don't worry though, ...

Hey there! I really liked this story but I'm going to jump right into grammar first and then give you my reactions and overall review at the end! I stand ...

Hello! I liked this chapter, it was a fun, quick read and reminded me a little bit of Meet the Robinson's (I don't know if you've ever seen the movie ...

Hello, I am back again! I figured since my last review didn't really help that much (since I only brought up points that previous reviewers to me had) I should ...

This was such a good story! I really enjoyed it, and I think you've got a really good base. However, this guy is depressed and while you told us that ...

Oohhh, this is Doctor Who fan fiction! I love Doctor Who, so this fits me well. Also "The Doctor said to herself." So this is thirteen? Yaaaasss! But anyway, this ...

Wowowowowow. Holy cow this chapter was good. I loved your descriptions, and I am incredibly intrigued. I want you to post the rest of this story so I can read ...

Hello there! This was a really cool story and I really liked it! Especially cause of your use of "you". That's not something people use much in writing anymore, but ...

Wow, I really like this chapter! This is my second time resding through it and I still think it's really good. Especially cause I do kind of relate to Matthew ...