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Re: California Girl: Chapter 9
:)
Oct 10, 2014 -
Re: Falling
Thank you. :)
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapter 1
Haha okay :)
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapters 5-8
Haha thank you so much for the advice and wonderful feedback! I am in love with this story...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapters 5-8
Haha I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the helpful correction :)
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapter 4
They didn't end up playing tennis - they were walking for a while but lost track of time. Thanks!
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapters 2 & 3
Haha thanks! I'll take your nitpick into consideration!
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapter 1
Thanks so much! :) You just made my evening :P I thought there would be more mistakes...! But yay! And yes, Percy inspired the whole Jackson character. You'll notice by ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: f
Awesome! :) Found no nitpicks (that Brunnera and the others didn't cover) Great job!
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Just Another Fall Night
:)
Oct 4, 2014 -
Re: d
Great piece! I love how Mira described Sal's eyes. I wanna be hanging with those perfect eyes! :)
Oct 4, 2014 -
Re: t5
:)
Oct 4, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapter 4
:) Thanks buddy!
Oct 4, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapter 4
Thanks for the wonderful expertise! I'll make the corrections. I'm glad you're enjoying my twist on romantic fiction - that's right, I'm planning a big game changer soon for Selene ...
Oct 4, 2014 -
Re: Citadel
:)
Oct 4, 2014