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The only part that killed it for me was when they DIED! Whyd that have to happen? It was good, but i still wish they would have lived. I like ...

WOW! I really like this! It was amazing! And im a guy.. so thats saying a lot. And you know im not gay! :D Im not really one for critiqueing, ...

Im completely blown away by the first part of your story, the 'essay'. Along with many other writers and readers, ive often thought of things like that, and it makes ...

I have to agree with the others who replied to this story. Its a major run off of the lord of the rings. Its a good story,but i think thats ...

Deffinately one of the better biginnings to stories that ive read. I must admit, it seems a little far fetched that he would be found had he really run that ...

Ok, first things first. A few things that confused me. The room Harry had entered was Room of Requirement Snape. IM not completely sure what this is supposed to mean, ...

Hopefully you plan on continuing this story, or else i will be burning with questions for the time being. Where did she get the fever? Just a coincidence that her ...

Generally, i just read the first few paragraphs, and stop because they tend to be too long. This on the other hand, hooked me from the very beginning. I had ...

Hey, great prolouge. I had a few things i didnt like though. You might add in who it is they are running from, bandits, or soldiers? I might also put ...

Wow, hardcore! Are you continueing with this? Cause you really should!! Its one of the best short stories i have ever read! Make it so shes not dead, and shes ...

That was really good. IM not very good at reviewing, but that i thought, was a really good story!! You should keep going with it though, like what happens to ...