sarahnsnow

I really liked this poem! It all mostly flowed well together smoothly and you have chosen good word choice. You also did a good job with your ideas and where ...

Wow, this story is very interesting. It pulled me in within the first paragraph! I'm interested to know what happened with her mom and I am anxious to know who ...

Hey I really liked this! This could totally pass as a good song. I liked how much you go into depth with the lyrics and you have chosen good word ...

Wow... you had alot of good description! I love the way you explained reality and how the real world is like. "I notice things, things that don't add up. Things ...

Hey! I liked this poem. You really described how it is to be dreamer. I especially liked the ending when you said, "I am a dreamer by sight -- fiercely ...

This was a really good poem!!!! You had some good imagery!! I love how you said "I’m running through the midnight woods. Branches whipping my hide. The wind crawls through ...

Wow... this story was pretty intense!! And it's so sad what happened to her her family. You had a good flow of sentences and I could picture the scene in ...

This was a very good poem!! I loved all the descriptions that you used. It went smoothly and you have extremely good word choice. I like how you described the ...

Hey! I really liked this poem! I liked how you compared everything to music. Like the guy being the director and the girl being played. That's really creative. In the ...

Hey, I really liked your poem. I liked the way you expressed the love and stuff. I liked how you said this: "But I looked in your eyes, into the ...

OOO! This beginning is very good! Maybe you could use more fluent sentences but it left me hanging! This could be like a mystery, suspense story. I think that would ...

This story really drew me in a lot! You had a good attention grabber that drew me in and it was interesting to know what kind of situation the girl ...