sarahcrosbeh

Wow! This is my kind of poem to be honest... It's funny, it's childish and it's simple to understand. This is really great and i think you should try get ...

I quite like this... But i had trouble with the structure of it. Then again, i'm no poem expert but that's just my view lol. I like the descriptions in ...

I tryed my best to read all of this, but i only got halfway through. :( What i read i quite liked. And i also like controversial topics so i ...

XD This is really great in a strange and rather interesting way... I do not know whether it be bad, or good...but i likes it. It made me chuckle abit, ...

Oof, i really like the design of it. :) The colours are cool. :D x

Wow This is great. It flows really well and your rhyming works really well :) Super Work :D x

This is great. :) Your descriptions and imagery are very good. I can't really find anything i disliked about this. Maybe though, as a suggestion, i'd add some punctuation to ...

I really like this poem, it's great. I continue on my journey to nowhere, enjoying nature, Bird calls surround me, the quiet splash of the water below, The many throngs ...

This is very good :) With the puncuation and stuff, well, the people above have already mentioned it ;) All in all i am very much enjoying this story.

I agree with Lizzy, i also read this in my head as if it was a rap :lol: I like this, its great and original :)

Aww, this is really cute :) I can't see anything i don't like in here...i love it :)

Firstly.. he led her into a beautiful kitchen; white tiles and marble surfaces, then turned around to look at her. Capital H, spell check :) (I'm sorry, i had to ...

I think this is great and i don't think it's cliche (well the first time i read it i didn't guess the end). Your descriptions are great and the idea ...

The rhythm is quite patchy and some bits don't flow, like the people above have mentioned. :? I can't say much as my poem knowledge isn't too good. The idea ...

I like this story and can see that it is developing well. I also have nothing bad to say about it lol . I'm not good with all the 'technical ...