sapphireluna

Thanks for the review! Sorry I'm late for reading it. I've been to Disneyland 5 times now I think. I'm WAY obsessed with Disney though. I spend to much time ...

This was actually for a contest about the story behind Disneyland ride passengers, so I probably should have mentioned that, or framed the character development thing differently, but I wasn't ...

Thanks for all of your suggestions! They were all extremely helpful and I really appreciate your review, so thank you! Enjoy Kingdom Keepers! XXXXX, sapphireluna

Hi this is Sapphireluna and I just wanted to say, that even though this isn't a review, these words are completely true and it makes me absolutely depressed to see ...

Thanks so much! I am a Disney addict as well, have you ever heard of Kingdom Keepers? It's a series of fantasy novels that take place in Disney World, I ...

Thank you, I will take your advice into consiteration. This is my first draft, it isn't perfect, so spelling and grammar errors I'll fix in my second draft.

Thank You for your review! I was writing this for a Disneyland Writing contest and I copied and pasted it into YWS so I could get some feedback for it ...

AWWWWWWWWW. I think I'm going in March, IDK how many days that is

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god that was a long review. 1660 characters! K bai sorry. XXX

Thank you!!!

Thanks

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. Yes- the orb piece WAS mentioned in a previous paragraph that was not mentioned in this one. Anyways- thx! XXX, sapphireluna

GOOD IDEA

@NafaKitty Hi. You don't know me but I just wanted to say that the idea that you don't write in chapter format because it ruins your flow is very true! ...