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I'm a bit confused about your last line. "record for the death" That last bit sounds as if you are talking about a list of deaths. Are you referring to ...

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I'm a bit confused about your last line. "record for the death" That last bit sounds as if you are talking about a list of deaths. Are you referring to ...

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I'm a bit confused about your last line. "record for the death" That last bit sounds as if you are talking about a list of deaths. Are you referring to ...

Why is this so true, especially among family members (namely parents)? I can honestly say I've experienced this. I love how, as a reader, I can connect to your work.

Wow...very dark and emotional. Keep up the great work.

Loved the poem. :) Nice use of imagery. My favorite part? "A family that glitters in the dark, where silver specks on midnight blue come as one to shine as ...

Nice poem...I can kinda relate to it because I don't know if midnight begins the next day or if it's still the same night

As a believer and a church goer, I enjoyed your work. It was full of honesty and encouragement for those who are enduring hard times.

I really enjoy poems that rhyme. I really liked your piece, but your rhyme scheme was a little off beat. It kept changing. Your emotions flowed through your words like ...

I'm an amateur author, so your review was more than helpful. Whenever I have the chance, I'll be back to spruce this piece up a bit. Thanks for the review.