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So what happened between him scrabbling to the surface and now? What happened to the girl or will you come back to that? All in all, a brilliant piece. You ...

Oh a really good story. The whole secrecy thing shows that they still don't know each other well enough yet. The fact there is a spy makes it even more ...

I really like this story. I love the whole way Nastusia has ended up a part of something really much bigger then thought of before. You manage to keep the ...

Wow I am sorry. Was Luna and Rima linked with Corons mother? Is there some really twisted link happening here? Sounds good and has all the creepy action that keeps ...

I liked the story. It was interesting. The whole outline of the story keeps you guessing on what is going on and eventually it all unfolds. Now there is just ...

This is an interesting story. The pace was good and the whole way it progressed seemed to keep me curious. Intrigued to know who these fishy people are and what ...

Wow. Sweet. You really start this of with readers going "Right. What's going on?" sort of thing. I like it. Their is this whole mysterious aura mixed with suspicion over ...

not bad. Got a bit lost at the start. I thought you had missed a bit. It sorted itself out with Blacks arrival though. Shame you are not putting anymore ...

Really nice. You make more questions as fast as you answer them. The old man just keeps you wondering about who she is. It is amazing how quickly she has ...

ok now it is getting really interesting. All sorts of questions come to mind, like what will the commander think when he finds out she is a dragon rider? will ...

Getting better the more I read and this is only chapter two. Really like the commander. Great detail and wonderful setting. This is a really good story. Still with the ...

This is good. Definetly graphic but good. Makes a change to some of the other stories you get. It leaves you wondering if the commander looks for her again or ...

nice if not a little disturbing. It was going great till the talking part. That could do with being altered better. just a thought, feel free to ignore me :) ...

Nice. I like it. The whole emotional mess. Thinking that they didn't love each other. The build up to suicide and everything was great. I also liked the way he ...

I liked it. You had mr caught right at the start. It was interesting and fast moving. Kept you reading to know if he managed to escape. I agree though, ...