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And yes.. it is straight from my journal.. i hope i satisfied your curiosity.

Hello there! I would like to thank you for your kind words... you're suggestions are helpful and i will try my best to improve. Glad to know you liked it. ...

Thanks for your kind word... good to know you liked it.. and there is no dialog because i was observing the artist there was no conversation between us... these are ...

Thanks for your kind words and suggestions. I will follow your advice. thanks for reading.

hello! my review the starting is beautiful, i could feel the sentiment. my favorite part is the second stanza,. ' how awful the relationship between musician and instrument? the man ...

hello! my quick review is that the title should be her eyes. because in the beginning he is complimenting her green eyes. and in the last sentence I don't know ...

thank you so much friend, but originally by sparking i was trying to explain the quick shiver you get when something unexpected happens, its like ants running through the body, ...

I just love it, amazing work. the second last stanza is a bit confusing but overall it is so good . I enjoyed reading it. good work, happy writing.

thank you so much for reading and sharing your views. and thanks for offering suggestions I appreciate it. and it is my second poem and I am not perfect so ...

and I need help with fifth stanza, can you give some ideas because I dont find that part so good. thank you

thanks for your review, and I will surely correct the mistakes.

thank you so much.

hello..!! I am trying to write but its not so easy for me to make it all perfect because my first language is Hindi and not English, so maybe that ...

thanks for your review and i want to say that English is not my first language so i am not so good at it, but i'll take care of these ...

thanks for your suggestions, and i am glad that you read it and pointed out mistakes but the thing is that i am not so good with English, its not ...