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Re: I want to remove the world's pain
hello my name is Hannah and here is my review. I love the title of this poem "I want to remove the world's pain" and I think that this is ...
Jan 2, 2016 -
Re: Beautiful
Hey my name is Hannah and here is my review on your poem. I really like this poem. I think its amazing . I like how you've written about inner ...
Jan 2, 2016 -
Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 13
Hello my name is Hannah and here is my review. you've written a lot, which is great, I can tell you have a passion for writing and you are really ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: 6 December
hello my name is Hannah and here is my review. I really like your poem and I like how you expressed your love for the person you were writing about. ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Life In The Day In A Life (Part 1 of 2)
hey my name is Hannah and here is my review on your poem. I loved reading this poem its amazing. I also love how you have used greek/latin numbers at ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Tiger, Tiger Burning Bright
hello my name is Hannah and here is my review. I like how you have added a photo of the tiger it gives the reader a visual image. I have ...
Dec 29, 2015 -
Re: Do you?
hello my name is Hannah and here is my review on your poem. I think its really good and you have not made any spelling or grammar errors which is ...
Dec 29, 2015 -
Re: Hore
hello my name is Hannah and here is my review I really enjoyed reading this poem I think its absolutely amazing and great to read. There are no spelling or ...
Dec 29, 2015 -
Re: One Night in a Forest
hello my name is Hannah and here is my review this is a very good poem. it is very well thought out and it is nicely presented in paragraphs but ...
Dec 29, 2015 -
Re: rivers & riverbends
hello there my name is Hannah and here's my review I like have you used both normal writing and italics I think that's great. when you said "and relish the ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: Drip, Drop
hello my name is Hannah and here's my review. I like the way you have set out your poem I think its very cool and artistic how you have written ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: Ode to Donald Trump
hello Hannah here. just wanted to add my input. this is a great poem and a fine piece of work. it really makes you think. I also like that this ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: The Logic of Life
hello my name is Hannah and here's my review of your poem I enjoyed reading it, I like that you used rhyming words my favorite is when you said "oh! ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: The Ship and the Storm
I love this. by the way you've described it I can picture all of it in my head. this is such a unique and fantastic piece of writing. I like ...
Dec 28, 2015
