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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: I want to remove the world's pain

    hello my name is Hannah and here is my review. I love the title of this poem "I want to remove the world's pain" and I think that this is ...

    Jan 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Beautiful

    Hey my name is Hannah and here is my review on your poem. I really like this poem. I think its amazing . I like how you've written about inner ...

    Jan 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 13

    Hello my name is Hannah and here is my review. you've written a lot, which is great, I can tell you have a passion for writing and you are really ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: 6 December

    hello my name is Hannah and here is my review. I really like your poem and I like how you expressed your love for the person you were writing about. ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Life In The Day In A Life (Part 1 of 2)

    hey my name is Hannah and here is my review on your poem. I loved reading this poem its amazing. I also love how you have used greek/latin numbers at ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fanfiction Re: Tiger, Tiger Burning Bright

    hello my name is Hannah and here is my review. I like how you have added a photo of the tiger it gives the reader a visual image. I have ...

    Dec 29, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Do you?

    hello my name is Hannah and here is my review on your poem. I think its really good and you have not made any spelling or grammar errors which is ...

    Dec 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Hore

    hello my name is Hannah and here is my review I really enjoyed reading this poem I think its absolutely amazing and great to read. There are no spelling or ...

    Dec 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: One Night in a Forest

    hello my name is Hannah and here is my review this is a very good poem. it is very well thought out and it is nicely presented in paragraphs but ...

    Dec 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: rivers & riverbends

    hello there my name is Hannah and here's my review I like have you used both normal writing and italics I think that's great. when you said "and relish the ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Drip, Drop

    hello my name is Hannah and here's my review. I like the way you have set out your poem I think its very cool and artistic how you have written ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Ode to Donald Trump

    hello Hannah here. just wanted to add my input. this is a great poem and a fine piece of work. it really makes you think. I also like that this ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Logic of Life

    hello my name is Hannah and here's my review of your poem I enjoyed reading it, I like that you used rhyming words my favorite is when you said "oh! ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Ship and the Storm

    I love this. by the way you've described it I can picture all of it in my head. this is such a unique and fantastic piece of writing. I like ...

    Dec 28, 2015


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— Epictetus