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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Just Like Everyday

    Hey Rainn, Though something that "just came out," I think this was a pretty cool poem to read:) I really liked the style you used. I think one of the ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Stay

    This was really cute and nice to read. My favorite part is the ending, nice closing! Can't wait to read more! Rose:)

    Dec 1, 2012
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Thankful

    I really enjoyed this poem. Some of the tenses threw me off a little while reading. For example, the second sentence, I think you should put "feel" instead of "felt". ...

    Dec 1, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I wish that someone could answer my questions

    WOW! This was really incredible. I loved how real and genuine it was, especially when so many people feel the same way. Gorgeous work, I would have liked a little ...

    Dec 1, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Me.

    Hi! To start, I love your poem! It almost reminds me of a book I read when I was younger. It has a nice playful confidence that flows very well. ...

    Jul 15, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Learning to Dance

    Hi! Wow, what an amazing poem! Your poem was so beautiful and graceful; much like dancing! The message you sent across was so simple; learning how to dance, but by ...

    Jul 12, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The First Time

    Hey! Nice poem you have here! I really liked the flow and the subtle happiness you weaved into it. You did a great job describing how your character is feeling. ...

    Jul 12, 2012
  • Poetry » Horror, Narrative Re: A Midnight Road

    Hey! I really liked the poem and there wasn't any grammar mistakes that I could see. Your poem flowed very well and then led up to the main idea at ...

    Jul 11, 2012


Poetry lies its way to the truth.
— John Ciardi