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Re: Just Like Everyday
Hey Rainn, Though something that "just came out," I think this was a pretty cool poem to read:) I really liked the style you used. I think one of the ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Stay
This was really cute and nice to read. My favorite part is the ending, nice closing! Can't wait to read more! Rose:)
Dec 1, 2012 -
Re: Thankful
I really enjoyed this poem. Some of the tenses threw me off a little while reading. For example, the second sentence, I think you should put "feel" instead of "felt". ...
Dec 1, 2012 -
Re: I wish that someone could answer my questions
WOW! This was really incredible. I loved how real and genuine it was, especially when so many people feel the same way. Gorgeous work, I would have liked a little ...
Dec 1, 2012 -
Re: Me.
Hi! To start, I love your poem! It almost reminds me of a book I read when I was younger. It has a nice playful confidence that flows very well. ...
Jul 15, 2012 -
Re: Learning to Dance
Hi! Wow, what an amazing poem! Your poem was so beautiful and graceful; much like dancing! The message you sent across was so simple; learning how to dance, but by ...
Jul 12, 2012 -
Re: The First Time
Hey! Nice poem you have here! I really liked the flow and the subtle happiness you weaved into it. You did a great job describing how your character is feeling. ...
Jul 12, 2012 -
Re: A Midnight Road
Hey! I really liked the poem and there wasn't any grammar mistakes that I could see. Your poem flowed very well and then led up to the main idea at ...
Jul 11, 2012
