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Hello there, sorry about the wait, my computer was being stupid... grr, technology! Anyways, I'm here now! Well, I would just like to say that I was totally blown away ...

Hello, Roon here, at your request! Hope some of this helps, nitpicks first: Sand trickles through my fingers as time goes by. And it soon starts to pour as the ...

Hello, Roon here! Okay, so I couldn’t actually find any spelling mistakes, in the bits where you’re saying “you want to know a secret” I’d put a do in front. ...

Roon here, I really like this, I can really relate, which is what a poem needs to do! I only have one nitpick and that is the spelling of inbetween, ...

Roonytoon, here again! *noms on story* Love it, you never cease to amaze me with your talent! Nitpicks: Sweet, glorious, warm, delicious, addicting blood. Addictive. The strongest emotion had been ...

Hello, Roon here! Another wonderful poem! Nitpicks first though! She always needed a fight We were never right So there I sat in the endless night Reminesing on my needless ...

Hello, Roon again! Nitpicks, as usual, come first! No body was found, and there didn’t appear to be any disturbance in the glass pieces, so they had no idea where ...

Hello, Roon here, at your request! I really like this, your emotion comes through very clearly, but I will start with nitpicks! I saw it in your bright green eyes

Hello! Roon here, sorry for the wait, my computer was in a mood with me! Anyway, here is my review, thanks for posting on my thread. I will start with ...

Hello, Roon here, at your request. I’m no expert on lyrics, by any means, but I will give it a shot! Nitpicks: I never thought I’d feel this way I ...

Hello, Roon here! Your first reviewer! :O I’m going to start with nitpicks, then move on to an overall idea of the poem. You are my hope, my heart, my ...

Hello, Roon once again! Wow… erm, I think this is the least believable of all your chapters, if I’m honest… I’ll start with nitpicks, and then explain why. Not sleeping ...

Roon, again! Kevin left Arnold sitting in his chair. He walked over to the officer, who was pointing to a dark object attached to the wall. Dark object? Be a ...

Heehee, this will be my 100th post! Yay! Anyways… nitpicking! Arnold read and reread the smoldering paper that he found on the ground. I think by this time it has ...

Hello, Roon again, sorry about the wait, today was a big day! Nitpicks: The sunlight peeked through the blinds and streamed into Arnold’s eyes. He stirred, waving at the sunlight ...