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Pudding! Okay, this took far too long, and I’m very sorry. I won’t explain, I won’t bore you with the details of my life during a review. I. NITPICKS It's ...

Hello, Roon here! This caught my eye, and I think that, with a bit of work, it could be incredible. I. NITPICKS Nights shadow slowly fades away

Hello, Roon here, welcome to YWS, I’m going to start with nitpicks and move onto the overall view of the poem. There backs have wings,

Hello, Roon here! Your poem really caught my eye, so well done on hooking the reader from the off. I admit, I was expecting to find something I would hate ...

Crocks! I sat down to read this so many times before I stopped getting interrupted. Sorry about that. Well I’ve read it about four times anyway. I think, in terms ...

Hello there, Roon here! I think you have a nice beginning, but hopefully you can make it better! I’m going to start by quoting bits that need a change, hope ...

Hello there! I'm going to start with nitpicks! This was excellent. Bubbles was the first to go. This was a good way to start, it really grabs the attention of ...

Hello, Roon here, as requested! Thank you for replying to my thread! I’m going to start with nitpicks. Not the morning lights or the dying days.

Hello there! Roon here! This was great, really caught my eye, on with the nitpicks! Dedication shows, Perspiration leading to success.

Hello, Roon here! I like the idea you have here, I think it needs just a little development, and it could be wonderful. With an iron mask he walks,

Hello, Roon here! I actually had to rewrite this review, as my computer ran out of juice just as I was about to post it. I actually almost threw it ...

Hello, Roon here! This really caught my eye, I’ll start with nitpicking! Kiss me softly. Let the water fall.

Hello there! I’m Roon, nice to meet you, I’ll start with nitpicks! She sits alone

Hello! I’m Roon! I’m going to start with nitpicks! Lies begin with truth

Hello, Roon here! This caught my eye. It’s a nice poem, but it needs a little work. Nitpicks! When did this life become so pointless