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I laughed. It was cute. Not hilarious. But funny. I appreciate these thoughts. You have a comical voice, and I agree with someone else that said it could be more ...

This is interesting. I say that because the words to express what this made me feel are so foreign and difficult for me to find. Your descriptions are beautiful. I ...

This is a cute prologue to what could be a very intriguing and well written story. I think the ideas are very creative and well thought out, especially with it ...

This is adorable. In a very sophisticated sort of way. I enjoy your use of Velvet and the description of it as well. The imagery is well established, I definitely ...

This is very interesting. I can definitely see this going somewhere. Where, I am not sure whatsoever but somewhere. I have a very small sense of who the character is, ...

This is super adorable actually. I was grinning cheekily by the end. I adore stories of that sort of love and first sight when it is played such as this. ...

I am in love with this. It is simple and elegant yet heartfelt and beautiful. This expresses things that so many of us feel daily and it encompasses this feeling ...

This was definitely an interesting and intellectually stimulating piece of work. I enjoy your thoughts. I was slightly bothered by the misspellings, but we all make mistakes. Your ideas are ...

The writing style of this piece was well thought out and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I was intrigued from the beginning although I was confused about the premise until ...