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thank you! I just wanted to clarify the "cut out..unwanted..too early" is in reference to being premature and a c-section. I was likening a c-section to the removal of something ...

thank you!

Thank you!

This is so pretty! The only things I would have done differently would have been to add 'visible' to the end of the third line and remove 'are' in the ...

I really enjoyed this poem. Immediately I think of somebody going through depression. I took this as maybe the seed is an antidepressant, of course that's just my interpretation. You're ...

Thanks so much!!

No problem reading it. The different font styles help with that.

I loved this! I prefer poetry that doesn't rhyme (and most on this site does) so that really stuck out to me. You have a very dramatic, detailed way of ...

Thanks! I just want to clarify that the like after heart was supposed to be "like survival was predisposed" but the I copied and pasted so the formatting became a ...

This is literally the first time in my 5 years of writing that I've had suggestions or constructive criticism, so thank you so much. I did want a way to ...

thank you so much!! This was pretty much a one-off short story that I did for a creative writing class. Your review made me so happy though! I screenshotted it ...

God, this is so great because you can feel the frustration of wanting to write something to commemorate the tragedy but not being able to. It's very sincere and powerfully ...

I'm not very good at writing reviews but I want to say that I really, really love the way you closed the poem with the title. And this made me ...