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take your own time in reviewing and thanks. And one thing i want to tell you that in this chapter i have written 'to-the-point' stuff. The stage performance of myra ...

thanks deanie you are too good. thanks for giving me your valuable review on my work.

yep alot. thanks dear.

tnx deanie.........must read my next chapter.......operation imperial ch-6 your reviews are very helpful...tnx again.

thanks mate! you are new ..huh! so do you want a mentor? if yes, them PM me.

thanks for your valuable review.

thanks mate! i appreciate your review! there are so many mistakes.....huh? because and i had written this work in my mobile's note pad app, and also i was doing my ...

thanks for reviewing my poem, i will correct my mistakes. why there are so many mistakes? because i had written this poem while i was doing my evening walk.......(in my ...

thanks for reviewing my poem, i will correct my mistakes. why there are so many mistakes? because i had written this poem while i was doing my evening walk.......(in my ...

thanks for reviewing my poem, i will correct my mistakes. why there are so many mistakes? because i had written this poem while i was doing my evening walk.......(in my ...

thanks mentor sweet!

thanks....deanie.....i will nullify my mistakes....n give u a perfect draft....

hey pal! [is the best thing God's given us.] your 2nd line of first stanza has one error: instead of 'god's' use 'god' , it will give better look to ...

wow! nice poem about motherhood! u framed each and every line with so much depth...wow it made my emotions li'l weak! ur dotty stuff between some words made reader to ...

tnx shiksha i will take care of my mistakes!