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  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'm not good at Fire Emblem

    Hey Abriatis! I really enjoyed your poem! I love cats, so it was super cool to read about your cats and their personalities. I wanted to point out that I ...

    Aug 13, 2018
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Funny Egg Poem

    Hi EagleFly! I wanted to start off by saying that I absolutely loved your poem! It’s not too often I read humorous poetry so I really enjoyed this. Some lines ...

    Aug 13, 2018
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: A Souls Heaven 2-A Poem Serial

    Awesome poem! It was very heart warming, as I myself love cats! You had some really awesome descriptions. I could definitely envision the cat as if it was right here ...

    Apr 24, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: view from a lawnchair

    Hi RoyalHighness! This poem was very nice. It was an interesting perspective, and was very well written. I had a lovely time reading it. I have a few critiques for ...

    Apr 24, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: cloud pictures

    Hey! Lovely poem! I enjoyed reading it. I don’t really have any problems with your poem, so I’ll just talk about what I like. :). A lot of your wording ...

    Apr 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: What do I want for when I die?

    Hi, I’m Riles! I wanted to start off by saying that your poem was super thought-provoking and I enjoyed reading it. It was mostly rythmic and lyrical, and I especially ...

    Mar 27, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Apple Tree

    Nice poem! It has a very interesting concept, and made me think in a new way. Nice descriptions, it's very thorough and I really got the picture. I especially enjoyed ...

    Feb 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: lost in the unreal

    Wow, I loved this poem! Your use of imagery is outstanding! "Kaleidoscopic, teary eyes" is a great line. The first stanza of your poem really pulled me in and made ...

    Feb 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Theatre Re: Dance

    Hey! I want to start by saying that I too am a dancer. I like your poem! As a dancer, I find it very relatable. It definitely conveys the truth ...

    Feb 11, 2018


It's been many years since I had such an exemplary vegetable.
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