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Thanks, I fixed those up. Very helpful, I appreciated it.

Haha, I know! It's so hard to get good reviews, so often people just talk circles around your poem and don't actually give you any help. If I can't give ...

Thanks, those were all really helpful. I knew that there were some discontinuities and disturbances in the flow when I read over it, but I couldn't quite tell what they ...

Thanks for the review. Those were the very first lines. They sort of stuck in my head all day and begged to be written, and I wanted to see where ...

Hey! So I, being a huge Disney fan, couldn't help but jump to their defense a little. I live in Florida, and Florida still hasn't passed a pro-gay marriage law. ...

This is so lovely! Wish I could review, but there's no way I can find anything to critique.

Thanks so much, I'm so glad it could have such a strong and positive effect!

Yeah, I meant the birds. If it's not supposed to be capitalized, I'll try to change that :). I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the positive feedback!

Thanks! I fixed it up according to those things mentioned :). Wow, I never thought about it being related to the red string of fate, but I've heard those stories ...

Thanks, I'm so glad to hear that it felt personal towards someone, and that you could read the personality. Those are some of the best compliments to offer a writer ...

thanks!

Thanks so much!

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. Hmm, haven't heard that song, I'll have to go listen to it. I will add that comma in there. Yeah, the last two lines ...

thanks, fixed it :)

Thanks! I forgot the "us" in the last line, I fixed it, so it might make more sense now.