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Okay first don't have a go at sodapop for reviewing the bad poem, she took the effort to do it and you should appreciate it. Secondly, I am experienced in ...

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Yes, it's because it's crude. I think it should be there and adds depth but I didn't like it. But it definitely should be there, don't get me wrong. ~Retro ...

Thanks for the review. I would just like to say the first word of this piece is ellipsis. Which means things are missing and feels like something is missing in ...

Hey, The writing in this piece is really good. The rhythm flows really well in this piece. I like this piece a lot. Keep it up. PM for anything. ~Retro ...

Thank you for the reviews everyone

Thanks for the comments :D ~Retro Disco666

Hey, I re-read this and have decided that you should defently do something with the start of this poem. It is pure genius. ~Retro Disco666

I actually like parts of this. I wasn't sure to expect, but it was good. :D ~Retro Disco666

Hey, I love it. No problems with it. Well done I can't wait to read more! ~Retro Disco666

I can't tell if i like it. That's the only thing i can think of putting. ~Retro Disco666

Your first line is one of the best hooks i have ever read. Pure genius. It shows struggles which people can put themselves, regardless of what that persons struggle is. ...

Love it. Love it. Love it. Simple as that. ~Retro Disco666

Hey, I love this poem. I was a bit unsure about it at first due to the title, but I am really glad i read it. Really good. ~Retro Disco666