retrodisco666

Hello:) It was interesting. My first thing is that I didn't notice that much punctuation, however I am not sure if that is just me so you may need to ...

Hey, I truly loved it. I even liked repetition which I usually hate. You gave us themes, some subtle, some not. You mixed languages together, it flowed really nice. It ...

Hello :), I like this. It has deep, almost hidden meaning which you have to really look for, but when you find it. It is really effective. My only slight ...

Hi, Sometimes a poem needs raw emotion for you to latch on to and harness, however here I am not to sure. I think that because it is quite distance, ...

Hey, I really like the use of enjambment in this piece, it is really effective and works well. To build upon that I would try to put some caesura in, ...

Hey, This is a very strange piece, which means I loved it. The taxi’s windshield is pelted by sleet. but dinner is still boiled lobster. Marble pillars stand, silently erect, ...

I loved it in a nut shell. There is nothing more to say. It was my perfect idea for a poem, and I think you have done justice with it. ...

Hey, From the title of this poem I could tell that it was going to be mainly around imagery. I was pleasantly surprised to find what felt like a storyline. ...

Hey. This poem is, okay. I don't particularly like it, but it is not my style of poem. I think all you context is good, and it has a nice ...

AWWWWWWWWW!!!! This is such a sweet meaningful poem. The rhyme does not feel force which makes it even more special. I love what you are trying to convey. Never pulled ...

I like the content a lot. I don't know if it was just me, but it seemed to be moving really slow. I would try and add bits that might ...

I liked it a lot. her favourite song would carry her away, divide her soul into each individual note I loved that line. It shows such rich imagery and creates ...

Hey, I haven't read the rest, but I thought I would read this and give it a go. I thought the piece started weak. I did not liked it, but ...

I loved this concept. I read a lot of poetry, but have not found a piece that deals with something like this. It brings an interesting take on everything which ...

Hey, I shall be your reviewer. This is very action pact, which is good. There seems to be no description however, which makes it seem more like a short story, ...