retrodisco666

Hello, I think this will be my 100th review so I thank you for that XD The thing I don't like about this piece is that it has no structure. ...

Hello, I don't know what to make of this poem if I am being honest. I love the description you use and I think that was superb, yet all except ...

This was amazing. It had very little meaning but it was rather deep which was surprising I felt like it was a very good lone poem. Let’s sit in the ...

Hey, To say you were rusty this wasn't a bad attempt. Your first line is a major hook so I applaud you for that, but after that, I am not ...

It is beautiful. I love it when it is from the point of view of a dead person. I think your descriptions were good and worked well. A very good ...

Hello and welcome to YWS. This was a good piece, except one tiny problem. Where was the punctuation? Towards the end of the piece your emotion really builds and on ...

Hello :), I like your first stanza, and then it kind of went down hill for me. Feels like my heart is breaking- little by little. The weight of disappointment ...

Hello, This is a very complex poem. It is very three dimensional. The time jumps a lot I think so I was lost in places. Honestly, I am not sure ...

Hello, Let me just get something out of my system. . . awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww This is an incredibly sweet poem, I liked it a lot. the too-white moon This is an ...

Hey Y'all, I have decided that I feel your poems are very much in the style of the Victorian era. You used some archaic terms in my opinion, but I ...

Hello, This is an okay poem. I liked what you're going for with the piece but i lacked depth I thought. As it stands the piece is very two dimensional, ...

Hello :) This is strange piece. It jumps alot and is very dream life. It is not something you read every day and I rather liked it. My main annoyance ...

Hello :) This is a perfect title for a poem. It sums up all my emotions in one. What I expected from this poem I did not get but yet ...

Hello :) I get the poem and I like what you are trying to stay. I liked your first line a lot and I think it is a very good ...

Hello :) This was truly excellent. It was so gripping. I felt like reading a short story and you did not disappoint one bit. I liked the way it circled ...