restlessheart14

Hey restlessheart here, Happy Review Day :) I really like this short piece of work, however there were a few parts that were confusing. Your use of vocabulary really paints ...

Hey :) restlessheart14 here, I'm going to leave a small review. I really enjoyed reading this chapter to your story, but there were a few times when i was a ...

Beautiful piece you have written here. I think it was an honest piece too because people could probably connect with especially since it is not uncommon. Also sometimes it is ...

Hey there senpai! I'm going to leave a review hope you find it helpful :) Cool story idea you have got going, however, i did get a few feelings of ...

Hey this is some pretty deep stuff! I just want to remind you that there are two different types of peace. The one you used in your work was peace ...

Hey! Nice work! I hope you don't mind if I give a little review. First off, be careful with run-on's and comma splices. Even though it might make the sentence ...

I understand your general message here, and it has potential to be a powerful statement. However, in the first line you start off by saying "it" twice, I do not ...

Wow! Nice job! I really enjoyed how you kept the identities of the subjects a secret by not giving away any names or characteristics. It allowed it to stay sort ...

I thought your short story or excerpt was very well complete. The words you used to describe everything were extremely fitting and helped one picture the setting and moods better. ...

I really liked this excerpt, it reminded me of a friend I have. She talks loud near her other friends and me, but when it comes to teachers and parents ...

WOW! Your a very descriptive writer, I felt like I was in the story it was so riveting. Personally I could not find any grammatic mistakes which is really good ...