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As crazycraz stated, this piece could use a quick run through a spell checker. Raise the stakes with this piece, I understand the protagonist is running after a high: however, ...

As chetanbhasin something detrimental for this piece is the lack of clarity. I would contribute to the fragments of thoughts that aren’t coherently tied to any stable scenes to solidify ...

As Van (fireheartedkaratepup) stated formatting is crucial. I wholeheartedly agree with their review (even though they’re on another team which supports my read mama who I plan to take down.) ...

I haven't read previous chapters therefore anything off base can be ignored. I apologize if this entire review is just that. Hopefully, you'll find something useful here. You took on ...

As methrirr123 stated, this piece is rather scant with details. Typically, I'm a fan of minimalism: however, this genre does require elaboration on the setting to give a better feel ...

This story could do with some elaboration. With some of that, it may garner sympathy or at the very least understanding from the reader for Sebastian. Ultimately, when it comes ...

The story has a lot of potential, but it’s overdue for some minor touches. lighting fire to the sky I didn't care for this. Sunsets are serene. Fire denotes hunger ...

Hey, I really appreciate you formatting this story. It's much easier on my eyes now. Thank you again, now let's get down to the nitty gritty here. The day was ...

What happened to chapter twenty one and twenty two? I earnestly tried to Google search them: however, I was unable to find them (it was a half-hearted attempt.) Regardless, I ...

I was compelled to read the piece thrice to understand how heart-warming Nick's speech was. Besides the formatting behind awkward by having one or two words every other line, the ...

It's beautiful to the ear, but that's it. There's not much going on in the poem. There's little no action, it's a snippet: a beautiful snippet, but nothing more than ...

Interesting story, but I feel as though it could've been developed a bit more. I understand you did it in a rush. I also question your decision to have this ...

How could you do this to me, Josh! You never told me what you looked like and-and imagine all those sex scenes we missed out on, those experimentation years in ...

What is this? I demand to know why I know more about this Macy girl’s looks than the protagonist that I have been faithfully following for the past five chapters ...

Oh, Josh -what are we going to do with you? I ask myself this at times. I already miss his home life. It was intriguing though to see what happens ...