rainynight13

When I read this I was thinking about growing up and honestly it's so sad. As a kid , the simplest things bring you extreme happiness. It doesn't take much ...

Wow...okay that would definitely be a very difficult choice to make but I have to say his choice really suprised me. I just don't think I could've done that. I ...

I really like the whole comparing depression to an island thing. People who make fun of depression often don't understand it. It's not something you claim to have simply to ...

It's a sweet poem but I think it's too short. Try to use similies and things like that to enrich your writing and help the reader better understand how YOU. ...

I feel like this relates to live very much , often as a child we see the world as nothing but great. There's always plenty to do and discover. Children ...

This is amazing and I can relate right now. You've definitely got lots of potential in you. But maybe you should add more detail next time so the readers know ...

This is so truthful I think it's really sad that slavery ever exsisted and in some parts of the world still does. I feel like we are more than not ...