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Re: Voices: A Political Epic In A Few Words
Oh, I absolutely love this poem! I just love the deep metaphors you use, and how they are still understandable by regular people. I'm not too great at poetry, mind ...
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: Strawberry Hearts -5-
Woah, okay, this is quite deep. If only we could all write so deep. So anyway let's get this party started! So obviously, I haven't read the previous chapters, but ...
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: Tomato Red: Thirteen - Fifteen
I guess I better be the first to review your work. ;P I bet it is somewhat of a disappointment that it is only me. But anyways happy first review ...
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: Infected Chronicles: prolouge
Hello! I finally get to read this magnificent story. Since I'm sure most people found your grammar mistakes, I will focus more on the plot. I really like the idea ...
Sep 20, 2014 -
Re: The Hybrids (Chapter 10)
Hello there. I can see no one has glanced at this piece since it is a later chapter. Sadly, I have not read the previous chapters. I understand what it ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: You Can Never Read This.
Wow. Okay. Woah. I am shocked to be the first one reading this. I can tell you right now you communicated the feelings perfectly. Your imagery is just amazing. I'm ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: I Want to Dance with Somebody
Hello there! I noticed no one has reviewed this piece. For a romance story, it was good. I loved how Selena reacted to Andrew's plan, and I thought his plan ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: Untitled
When did I forget you actually write? Anyway it is great seeing you here. Bear with me, poetry is my weak spot. Anyways, I do mostly agree with Silla. As ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: Starry Sky
Hello there! Forgive me, I am not very much a poet so my advice isn't going to be the best. Anyway, I really like your poem. You put nice imagery ...
May 30, 2014 -
Re: Changing Bitterness
Hello and Happy Review Day! I've noticed that this has a ton of reviews, so mine probably won't be of much help. I'll focus mainly on the major things since ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Diakrino- The darkness within (Chapter 3)
Hello and Happy Review Day! Rainbow is here to review this wonderfully haunting piece you got here. First off, I love your plot and I am deeply sorry I haven't ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Faded Memories Chapter 5
Hello! Happy Review Day! Well, time for the review. First off, interesting story. I am sorry I haven't read the other chapters, but I can tell this is an interesting ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: (Need a title)
Hello! I'm bored so I thought I should stalk your work >:D This essay is really good. I mean really good. You successfully make the reader think about the true ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: The Man Who Came from the Desert - Chapter 2 - The Arrival
Rainbow here for another Review Day review! I like your story so far, though I had not read the first chapter. However, I already have the feeling of what might ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Freedom
Hello! I heard you wanted this reviewed and I can see why! This poem is really great and super true. I absolutely love how powerful and deep this poem truly ...
Mar 30, 2014
