quietcatastrophe

WE HAVE KINDA SAME WRITING STYLE AND WELL I DO WRITE BUT THAT DOESN'T MEAN I'M NOT JS I AM NOT PERFECT AND NO ONE ELSE IS BY THE WAY ...

I feel like this part could be rephrased a little. The “glass” metaphor is nice, but maybe it could show that the love was already fragile and could have fallen ...

This is such a bittersweet poem, isn’t it? The bitter part is that you don’t really know what’s happening in their life anymore—what they like now, what they’ve been through, ...

This poem is so vulnerable and sad, and I somehow relate to it because I have something kinda similar written in my notes. Apart from that, this poem shows how ...

Nicely written. I liked the way it intrigued the reader in the beginning. Repetition is nicely used, and overall it's a nice poem. I guess it can be improved a ...

Heyy, hope you're doing good now! Here's my review. I started reading because I saw *Apocalypse* by Cigarettes After Sex was playing, and I was like, "Yeah, I'm definitely reading ...

I found this poem pretty relatable since that's how anxiety works right? it's raw and immersive. The repetition of "drowning" and the vivid imagery of noise, flickering lights, and suffocating ...

woah it's pretty good! As it conveys the message about we wise or fool are mostly in these races like rattraps but the gambler he goes all in and live ...