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Re: Tab likhunga jab aatma se avaj ayegi...
Nicely written. I liked the way it intrigued the reader in the beginning. Repetition is nicely used, and overall it's a nice poem. I guess it can be improved a ...
5 hours ago -
Re: how does it feel to almost die (part one)
Heyy, hope you're doing good now! Here's my review. I started reading because I saw *Apocalypse* by Cigarettes After Sex was playing, and I was like, "Yeah, I'm definitely reading ...
11 hours ago -
Re: attack on my mind
I found this poem pretty relatable since that's how anxiety works right? it's raw and immersive. The repetition of "drowning" and the vivid imagery of noise, flickering lights, and suffocating ...
Jul 16, 2026 -
Re: The Ultimate Gambler
woah it's pretty good! As it conveys the message about we wise or fool are mostly in these races like rattraps but the gambler he goes all in and live ...
Jul 16, 2026
